Some of the writing here was hilarious! Even Pratchett-esque. I loved reading the side notes (the blue text). I've never cared much for potty humour, but besides that, the story was quirky and even surprising in some places. I think it could use another proofread, as I noticed some typos and missing/extra words, but other than that, it was an imaginative and fun read!
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I love your writing style. It feels like this is an honest game, like, you become yourself without trying to be another developers. Good job.
Thank you!
Some of the writing here was hilarious! Even Pratchett-esque. I loved reading the side notes (the blue text). I've never cared much for potty humour, but besides that, the story was quirky and even surprising in some places. I think it could use another proofread, as I noticed some typos and missing/extra words, but other than that, it was an imaginative and fun read!
Oh wow, that’s solid feedback, thank you!